My Character Kaelexx

[dosdavonyos]

Character name: Kaelexx
Hair color: Light blue
Eye color: Gray
Weapon: Ice spear, Twin Swords
Element: Ice
Abilities: Blue Flame, Ice lancer, Frigid Cross Strike, Demon Frost

Bio: A warrior from the land of Ice, a traveller who walk alone with his frozen heart.
Kaelexx's power of the blue flame is capable of freezing almost anything. Equipped with with a spear made of ice and 2 swords forged by his own two hands with the blue flame, he wanders aimlessly around this world.

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Less improbability would be nice too. A spear of ice will not last long outside of winter, and what the heck is "blue flame", that FREEZES, no less? Naruta doesn't work that way. I'd recommend you get rid of that. That and the "abilities" you list are not Ice capabilities.

The swords would most likely be forged by an experienced blacksmith as well, which you have not indicated this guy is.

Also, how old is this Kaelexx? Where did he come from? Where is his Sign located? What turned him into a cold-hearted guy? Does he have any family? As he stands, he sounds more like something out of a bad anime or "Devil May Cry", and that's not going to fly here.